[That certainly was a lot to read. However, he was willing to take in whatever criticism he was given as he did want to get better. Who knows, maybe when he gets back home, he could start writing under a pen name...]
I see. I was hoping for a story that would be easy to read and leave things up to interpretation. I heard that would leave people to think about the characters motivations since I wanted to be more interesting. I didn't want the story to be too long as I was afraid it would lose the reader's interests. However, I'll keep that in mind when I rewrite it.
To be honest, the story is more about how bravery and courage is what makes a person stronger. If they continue to hide in the shadows, nothing will get done. I was hoping the darkness within the penguin and the turtle was a way to show how cowardly they could be. It showed that they wanted the easy way out. But I suppose I can't be vague in these kind of stories...
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I see. I was hoping for a story that would be easy to read and leave things up to interpretation. I heard that would leave people to think about the characters motivations since I wanted to be more interesting. I didn't want the story to be too long as I was afraid it would lose the reader's interests. However, I'll keep that in mind when I rewrite it.
To be honest, the story is more about how bravery and courage is what makes a person stronger. If they continue to hide in the shadows, nothing will get done. I was hoping the darkness within the penguin and the turtle was a way to show how cowardly they could be. It showed that they wanted the easy way out. But I suppose I can't be vague in these kind of stories...
Thank you though, I appreciate it.