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[scooba]

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Sender ID: Scooba (Freminet)
To: EVERYONE
Subject: Freminet will attempt to befriend people through story writing
Warnings: N/A

....I'm sorry to ask this but would here be anyone who is willing to write a story with me? It doesn't have to be long; I just want someone's opinion on something.

[Because he needs to go out and befriend people, right? All he hoped was that he could just keep it through text!]

Comments

un: paridisaea

[empyrean_mirror]

I'd love to, Freminet.

[scooba]

...You promise you won't laugh when I say the story is about a turtle and his penguin knight as they travel to fight a mysterious monster?

That lurks in a cave that might grant a person a wish?

[empyrean_mirror]

Of course I won't laugh.

But I'm curious--is the monster guarding that wish-granting power?

[scooba]

Yes, they are but they are also wishing for more.

Perhaps a meaning in their life...

[empyrean_mirror]

If that miracle cannot grant them their wish, perhaps it's the knight who can?

[scooba]

Perhaps but the knight would have to prove himself worthy to the creature. Will he pass the test, or will he fail?

[empyrean_mirror]

But what is it that the creature is looking for? If all he truly wanted was companionship...than it isn't a battle the knight needs to win.

text, un: andstill

[andstill]

Can't say it's something I've ever tried before. But if an amatuer's eyes will do I'm happy to put them on whatever you need thoughts on.

[scooba]

.....

You think you can tell me what else I should add to a story about animals trying to fight a mysterious creature in a cave?

Especially when it might grant them a wish?

[andstill]

Oh, animals? This might be in my wheelhouse after all.

What are they wishing for?

[scooba]

That's what I'm having trouble with.

I'm not sure what they should wish for.

[andstill]

Hm.

Maybe they did something wrong, and they're looking for a way to fix it. There's a lot of people wish for second chances.

[scooba]

What would they have done to deserve a second chance?

Perhaps....they did something terrible and unforgiveable that makes them go to such great lengths to obtain a wish.

[seasaltkeys]

I mean, I've never written a story before, but I could try?

[scooba]

Um...

What do you think I should do to make a story more interesting? Especially when there might be some fighting involved? And a wish too.

[seasaltkeys]

[Even though he has more or less lived both of those things, Roxas has to think for a moment, if only to find the right words.]

What kind of a wish? A big one?

You could make the fights really big to?

[scooba]

I could.

However, would it be appropriate to when it involves animals and a creature they have to fight to get the wish?

[seasaltkeys]

Well, what kinda animals and what kinda creatures? Because I've had to fight both and it usually turns out okay

[scooba]

A penguin and a turtle fighting off a dragon.

[Hey, wait a minute.......]

Although, I certainly hope that you didn't have to fight against a dangerous creature such as a dragon....

UN: hammertime

[forgeabettertomorrow]

A story? Sure why not? What kind of story do you want?

[scooba]

A fantasy but with some kind of mystery and some magic involved too.

...Or is that a little too childish?

[forgeabettertomorrow]

Why would that be childish? That sounds awesome!

So we need a hero in the story. Someone people can root for and look up to. Maybe someone who wants to be a knight? What do you think?

[scooba]

I was thinking of having a turtle and his penguin companion with him.

Oh and the penguin happens to be a knight to take down a creature in a cave that could fulfill the wish of anyone.

[forgeabettertomorrow]

Whoa it can fulfill anyone's wish? Why would the penguin knight want to defeat that creature? Was someone gonna use it for evil?

[scooba]

...More that they want to erase a past that they committed.